God, sounds exactly like my Grandma.

A fucking bitch.

Excellent plot! :)

LOL, the ad above the page is for OurBabyMaker, and it says: Go ahead - Make a baby!

I really love it! Mira and Seth are the cutest couple EVER. Cuter than Edward-&-Bella & Peeta-&-Katniss COMBINED. It kind of sucks that I just now discovered it, b/c I technically know how it ends. Mira is most likely keeping Sunshine, seeing as there is a sequel.

PS: I looked your collages; I think it's hilarious that Adam is Brad Pitt! I pictured him as the Dad on Juno for some reason: bald & awesome. And Seth is exactly as I imagined him. HOT.

PPS: It was weird 1st when Seth was an asshole, b/c my little bro is named Seth. The whole time, I was like, "If Seth EVER does that do a girl, I will KICK HIS ASS!

PPPS: Aunt Leda is AWESOME!

Out of Ten: 10 :)

Stars: 5!

So I tried to read the whole story in one night, but I couldn't finish it. I'm DEFINATELY finishing this tomorrow though! It's really, really good!

~Maryanne

So, I have seen this book come up on fictionpress before, but I never read it.

Then, I got the idea to write a story about teen pregnancy, currently in progress and not on fictionpress, but I read this while I wrote mine just to see what you knew about that kind of stuff (and so I wouldn't copy anything of yours)

But anyway, this is an amzing story, full of everthing that someone might look for in a book. I loved it, and I've also already read the first twelve chapters of the sequel.

I also loved how you didn't just make having a baby full of sunshine and roses... You showed the difficulty, too.

Congrats on a great story (and a great baby name :D)

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WOW! You beat me because this story is very long and i love it. And my story is definitely will be long but i am slow to updates with other things eg work, study lol

I would love it if you have time to read my other stories whenever you have time. And its fair don't you agree lol

As i promise you that the end of the story will have long review from me becaue you deserve it.

I really love it from the begining to the end

This story is like a movie

Also you are doing well with your characters where you know the past, present and future. Great job

I love it how you chose names that match the characters and their personality

I am wonder how does you got those ideas into this story?

I admire you that you write a long chapters. WOW!Thats must be very tough time to take your time to work on it :)

And I will read the sequel when i have time :D

Also you are welcome to talk with me about anything :)

Hope that you will write a story with one of characters of those or write a story with something new eg hungry game, harry tter fanfic one day

Also i am wonder if you ever think to become a writer one day?

i am really enjoy read it and hope thats sequel will fill wedding bells :D

Love it and its so so good

Of course a new born baby usuaully exhausted but they are the joy of new life, new love etc in the new family of two parents :D

Aww i love it and its so beautiful story i ever read it

I am glad that i found this story and i really love it

I think you should ost this story on other sites eg wattpad

Because you are amazing writer and you deserve it more than me.

And remember that stay positive always

Whatever happens in your life and keep forward with smile because challenges are await for you in every corner in your life.

Keep hold on hopes always and be strong :)

Aww i love that name because Lucy means light and its positive meaning for the child. And its perfect for her.

Hope that seth and mira will have more children in the future after they will get mary one day :D

Love it and can't wait to see what happens next in the chapter. Hope that its girl :)

Love it and its amazing chapter :)

lol seth and mira are argue about the names for their child like marriaged couples lol

Very funny :D

aww i love it and its so so cute chapter :)

Aww i love this chapter because its fill love, laugh, cry and many things. :D