omg, this was really interesting...:)

but poor mira pascal...:/

I want to know what happens next so I will just read the next chapter;)

I just have to say this story is well written and brilliant! I love it. I havn't read the other chps yet but, Paige and sara are being bitchy -.-

oh well, i'll just end my review so i cud read the other chapters.

-Kitty (i havn't logged in)

Regarding the L-word: Lesbian? Lesbians?

(Sorry. Hopeless Scott Pilgrim fan over here.)

That said, I have enjoyed this story thouroughly!

This was truly a beautiful story. Favorited. Gonna start reading the sequel right now.

Dayuummm. Poor Seth, that was a bit unexpected. I can't see him wanting anything to do with Mira so far but maybe he will soften and his player ways will change.

I can't believe that I just found this story today! It's only chapter 4 and the drama has already begun. What a twist that would've been if Mira's mum was pregnant too! So far, I'm liking Matt & Marli. But so far, I'm not too sure about Mira. I can't put my finger on it, but there is just something I don't like about it. But it's too early in the story to judge soo.. We shall see if she improves (or worsens).

OMG! Seth sounds exactly like this guy iin my grade! They even have similar names (his name is Sean). I don't care whAt Seth looks like, I'm imagining him looking like Sean. Dayumm. And I'm imagining Ashley as this girl in my year names Alex. Biggest slut/bitch out.

I like Paige and Sara. They seem quite realistic. I think you could've elaborated throughout this story how rich Paige is (that's what it sounds like anyway) and made her gone through various boyfriends throughout the year, not just sleeping with Seth. Anyway, this chapter is a bit like the ep. Falling in Love from Secret Life. I just hope that Mira isn't as miserable as Amy was in the first story.

suchh a good start to the story! loved the whole counting down/thoughts thingg.

How did Seth break her heart? Jake is her boyfriend!

Why the hell is Mira so upset? Seth is not her boyfriend, Jake is.

God I hate her!

This story is supermegafoxyawesmazinghot! I loooooove it AND the sequel so farrrrr! AUTO FAVE!

~XiXi Scarlet

Hi. Sorry to keep you wait and sorry if I don't read your story very often so here I am.

Wow I loved it and I don't understand why Seth is angry at Mira because she told her family about it.

Seth should know that Mira want to help him out and she care about him because she loves him so much.

And I will read the rest of this story this weekend sorry for delay.

Yay! And hope that you will write another story for Sara or Matt etc :D

Can you read my new story whenever you have time please? Thanks :) xx

See, what I don't get is how the baby isn't already like popping out prematurely. The amount of times she has cried and broken down and blah blah blah is unfathomable, granted she's been through alot, that's why I'm saying it's unrealistic that she hasn't popped it out yet.

And in this chapter she said she'd always been so strong. But she hadn't been strong. From the beginning, the moment she was pregnant and told him, and he said he didn't want anything to do with it, she was hurting. She hasn't been strong from the minute she found out she was pregnant...she's just perservered and she's becoming stronger - there's a difference.

Oh and the player (The Secret Life of the American Teenager) got molested by his dad too...

So, about into chapter 2, I realized 'hey this sounds really familiar,' and it's because it's exactly the same as The Secret Life of The American Teenager. Now, I've watched like 3/4 of Season 1 and it wasn't because I overly enjoyed it, but because I had nothing else to do and it was a 4gb download - no waste here - but, it's exactly the same dude. 16 year old pregnant to player of the school, sister pretended it was her baby, dad left when he found out blah, blah, blah. It's very dramatic and really lame, no offence of course. I'm just pointing out that it's overly cliche and that in the first chapter you said you hoped it wouldn't turn out like this...*sigh*

Anyway, I'm going to keep reading, because maybe I'll discover why this has like 1000 views...