Reviews for Metamorphosis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh I love this so far! I have go to to bed now (its like 11pm where Im from :((( But I'll read the rest tomorrow! Oh, and I hope Mira gets to talk to Seth soon. And I don't want her to give up the baby! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really like this already! This story has a great start. Can't wait to read the rest! |
![]() ![]() I said I wasn't gonna review till the very end, but this by far one of the best stories I've ever read. EVER. When they said they were keeping the baby, I went into a fit of happiness. I have no idea how you did it, but you made me fall in love with these characters within a matter of minutes. Thank you, SO MUCH for writing this, and I can't wait to read the sequel :) |
![]() ![]() The story kept me entertained to the end. Thank you. This story should be published, or turned into a movie. This is one of the best internet stories I've ever read. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE this story. And this is coming from a 19-year-old straight guy. I can't get enough of it. Mira and Seth's characters are so realistic. I love their connection. Like I sad before, you will be an amazing writer someday. I swear, my heart was pounding while Mira was in labor. I'm actually getting kind of sad that it's ending. But it's good to know that there's a sequel. I can't wait to finish this, and start reading the next story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cute! I love this story so much! I'm so glad there's a sequel I can go on to now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED IT 3 The ending was cute. I have to read the sequel now :D SETH MIRA FOREVER! 3 I'm a fangirl now... |
![]() ![]() SEQUELLL! If you don't, I'll be sad. :( I'm sure tons of others would be too. I love Matt, Jamie & Luke. I'd love to see more of them in the sequel. -Ali |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna know the story of the younger couple. ) I think It would be cute! ) |
![]() ![]() Okay, I can't take it anymore. After reading so many chapters, I finally have to tell you. This story is BEYOND brilliant. Your characters are very compelling, and the writing as well as the dialogue is ingenious. I can't wait to keep reading. It keeps getting better and better. The ending of this chapter is some of the best writing I've ever seen. I can already tell you'll be a great writer someday. |
![]() ![]() SEQUEL! ! Omfg. Sequel. |
![]() ![]() Overall the storyline didn't break and was very interesting. Some things need tidy up. One thing; Mira. Ugh. Like I know being a pregnant teen is tough and there's all those extra hormones but she pissed me off to no end. Moody bitch with no faith in hers or anyone elses ability. Loved Seths character development. He was pretty much the only character I liked. Wanted to punch everyone else in the face, besides Matt. Would like to see a sequel. |
![]() ![]() NOOO! It can't be over! Still, an amazing way to end the story! Luke calling Matt dada melted my heart! :) There is a lot of potential for an amazing sequel soooo... SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, such a perfect ending! I loved it, you're an amazing writer! I really loved Matt and Jamie's story - I actually think their story could make for a nice sequel... There's a lot of potential with Ross and we'd get to see Mira, Seth and Lucy too. ) Eeek, you're amazing and I don't want these characters to go! Sequel, sequel, sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHHHH! ITS OVER. i'm crying my eyes out right now (well, not really, but i am on the inside). i can't believe it. this story is amazing and well-written and sweet and i could go on and on! and to answer your question, i for one would love a sequel :) i also like the way this story ended though, so i would say leave it as is. maybe you should write another story? i for one would definitely read it :) |