Reviews for Metamorphosis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There's something about being reviewer #1000 that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy. I think you should give that person a cameo appearance somewhere in the story xD For me the chapter I was waiting for since Ch. 67 was the one before this one. I love buildup chapters personally. They're the reason folks want to see what will happen next. And you're damned right this isn't the final chapter. Not even an amateur would end the story at the birth. You gotta write about the immediate aftermath. adjusting at home and all that other good stuff. You said there's gonna be a sequel as well so...yeah _ ...The possibility Mira and Seth will make a cameo appearance in Baby of Mine has increased from 10% to 51%. If you approve of my using them in my story it'll increase to 87.33%. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooooo, she said I love youuuuuuuuu. I love (haha) how motherly Audrey is to Seth. Who, by the way, I can totally picture being tripped by a blanket. And yay! A girl! Very nice name by the way. Though it did kind of surprise me, you know with all of the unusual names. Like Marlina and Mirabelle. Which kind of makes me wonder why Matt's name is so normal... Anyways, Lucy and Marie go really well together. It just sounds right, like it fits. And now I must go listen to the Skillet song 'Lucy' and look at baby Lucy, so until next chapter (two things; imagine me saying that all dramatically :) and I have no idea what else you're going to do with the story, so that's why I'm ending here), -IAmEmeraldfae |
![]() ![]() this chapter was AMAZING! and it exceeded my expectations! haha and i absolutley LOVE her name! :D its funny that you would post this today, becasue one of my best friends aunts just had her baby today! :D great great great job! i love this story so much! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! Haha a chica. I told you! Couple things. Yea it did live up to my expectations. Why Lucy Marie? And is it pronounced Marie, stressing the a,or Marie stressing the ie? Just curious. And wow that's a lot of people in the waiting room. By Pascals, do you mean Leda as well? Very good job. This better not be the end. Are you planning on doing a spin off about Miss Lucy? How far is this story going to go before the end? I was kinda hoping she'd have Seth's eyes just because they are so pretty in coloration. Yah Carolyn has emotion! Are Matt and Jamie gonna have a kid? What's going to happen next? This chapter was top notch, even better than previous chapters. Oh and I've got my story typed up, but I can't decide how it starts. Should it start in the present with the girl already 15? Or should it start in the past with the forbidden faery-human love affair, then fast forward to the girl? Anyway sorry to bother you with my stuff. Amazing story. Amazing chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was on the edge of my seat. I think that Lucy is the perfect name. I can just imagine her. She is probably so cute. I love this story. Don't let it end. |
![]() ![]() I love your story and I love the song Lucy! Strangely enough, it fits this story because Mira was going to get rid of the baby, not abort her, but put her up for adoption. I think you did good with that chapter. |
![]() ![]() I love this story! I really hope it won't end anytime soon now that the baby is here. I want to hear more of Mira, Seth and little Lucy's story! |
![]() ![]() Awww really? lucyy? no offence but i thought it would be more original but o well its ur choicee. love ur storyy |
![]() ![]() Welcome Lucy! Can't wait to keep reading more...please don't end the story so soon :( |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not even gonna lie, I teared up. YAYY! She had the baby! I love the name! I can't wait to see where they go from here! Awesome chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD, I TOTALLY GUESSED THE NAME LUCY! I DON'T KNOW HOW... BUT I DID! WHEN 'IT CAME TO MIRA' I WAS LIKE 'SHE'D MAKE A CUTE LUCY'. HEHE ANOTHER CSI NY REFERENCE. LUCY IS DANNY AND LINDSAY'S DAUGHTER. SHE'S A SURPRISE BABY TOO. Anyway... AMA-FUCKING-ZING! I love you! I love Seth! I love Mira! I adore baby Lucy and Mira LOVES Seth! Eeeeeeeek! Best chapter ever! I'm so fan-girling right now it's unreal. Keep at it, I love this story and never want it to end. I'm so going to legit cry when you announce it's the final chapter. LOL |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! This chapter was absolutly amazing! I love the name. It definitly fits. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was listening to Lucy as I was reading this. O.o AHHH A GIRLLLL YAYA |