Reviews for Metamorphosis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter as always! Oh the suspense! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far! Haven't reviewed in a while so I thought I should! Love the suspense you put into to it, and how much more drama filled it is than the usually teen pregnancy story! My favorite character by far is Seth! I can see why Mira found it hard not to fall for him. Anyway keep up the good work because I love your writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done chapter! Continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Mira ... By the way, I love her name Mira ... I know you pronounce it Meer-uh, but when I see it, I think of My-ra. So yeah! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well if reviews get updates, then consider this a review, even though this story is complete! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So THAT is who Seth Elsen is ... I can see how he'd be hard to NOT fall for ... Like it so far! Keep up with the great work! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe, poor Mira! It must suck being pregnant as sixteen! Great chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far! :D It's kind of short, but it's well written. Meer-uh Pass-cul ... Interesting name ... |
![]() ![]() Oh. MY. !CHEESE! I actually kind of figured it out before he said that it was, yahoo know, his dad. And my throat actually TIGHTENED. My good nacho platter, yikes! |
![]() ![]() Hmmm... Jake? Is it? Hmmm? :P |
![]() ![]() Well. Jake's in trouble now. Me: (chases Jake into hungry lion's cage: Jake: (gets eaten) Seth: Yes! |
![]() ![]() I HATE JAKE! THERE ARE NO WORDS! NONE! I KNOW IT'S NOT REAL, BUT RAWR! |
![]() ![]() Hmmmm... Seth is a huge jerk, but Jake seems really overprotective. I'm so confused! Wah! |
![]() ![]() Um. Uh-oh. Poor... everyone! |
![]() ![]() What objects are there to throw at you? I like Mira/Jake way better than Mira/Seth! |