I was sure her mother was going to guess by the nervous demeanour and the tears but the pictures were an interesting way to have her find out. Wondering what will happen now. Great chapter again.

What a dreadful experience for the poor girl. I hope Seth gets his come-uppance. That was so bad for poor Mira.

My goodness, 8 tests! Well you can't be surer than that I suppose. I liked your unusual idea checking with so many.

I liked the way you wrote it with the minutes counting down. It made it very tense which is of course how Mira was feeling. Well done.

happy birthday! Lucy shares a birthday with you:)

This... just the best ending3

I liked the ending of the chapter. Loved it actually. Very sweet.

AHHHH:D will you read my story and tell me what you think? It would be and HONOR if you would!

stupid pants evil asshole jake

really good so far! but where is the rest?

Very good story so far. I definitly plan on reading the rest of it. plus its sequel. ok now I have a question. Do you actually speak spanish?

It's really interesting good work!

Nice work! Can't wait to read the sequel!

*applauds*

You did a great god with the emotions in this scene; I can't stop crying right now.