Seth's going to spread the word. I know it.

Wow. Very good job!

Stupid Seth.

I'm from Fanfiction, so that's where my name comes from. But anyways, I liked it. Nice way of describing it.

Sorry to leave my first review here, but I was too busy reading to stop and coment. I absolutly loved this story. This would make an AWESOME book. U should get it published...

Again, sorry for leaving my coment at the end. I just couldn't stop reading! :)

I've read only to about Chap 22 and I just wanted to say that you should really just check your grammar and tenses when writing.
Other than that, I'm really intrigued and keep up the good work!

Ohmigod...This was, like, amazing! Seriously, I do not cry AT ALL but this story almost brought me to tears! It was...like...laughing on one page, almost crying on the next. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

*round of applause*

Off to read the sequal! :,)

Lilly

OMG!its a perfectly dramatic book!fit to be made into a daily of the good ones. u roc!cant wait to read the sequel!

it's me again. just writing to tell you I've been up all night reading this story, and I understand why you wrote this chapter this way, but babies normally move for the first time between 4 and 5 months. just thought I'd let you know! anyways, I'm really enjoying out, but again, be careful with

so I've noticed some mistakes so far. I have three children and some of the things you're saying doesn't make sense. first off, the pregnancy tests would have come out negative, if not all, then some, because at that time, the pregnancy hormones wouldn't be as strong in her urine as it is as the pregnancy progresses. second, you really don't start showing until you're at least 3 months, and even then it's a small bump. third, they cam tell the sex after 20 weeks, which by going by the standard 4 weeks in a month, would make it 5 months. and finally, she wouldn't be able to hear the heartbeat on the first sonogram because the heart would've been too small for the machine to pick up. but besides all that, I really am enjoying this story, just be careful with your tenses and your povs.

This is hilarious! xD It's been a while since I've laughed this much.

Honestly, your story is very good both plot-wise and setup-wise, but everything relies on your protagonist's anti-abortion stance, which I continue to find hilarious.

Godspeed, though.

OMG!

Yay! Character development. :)

Oh My God.

Cliff hanger!

Oh God...