Reviews for Flight to the Stars
5livelaughlove5 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
I love these stories and miss them so much! I can't wait until you've made them ebooks.
Meli Sand chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I read this and Nightingale a long time ago, before getting an account here, and I loved every bit of it. It sucks that you had to remove all your writing (I was planning to read some of your other works). :) Keep writing!
Sammykitty93 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
It really stinks that you had to remove these. I'm going through the same exact thing right now with people sending me "offers" to buy the copyrights to my works and have removed a couple of my works from this site already because I don't want them stolen so I feel your pain D:

This version of Peter Pan was awesome though! I couldn't stop reading it once I started it was so good. Don't ever stop writing because you definitely have a knack for it :D

E.J.A Roberts chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This is certainly a twist on the classic Wendy character, not only is she older but her family life is extremely different which is pretty cool to see. I like your descriptions the best and can't wait to read more of this.

By the way I go by the name shironeko316 on fanfiction, nice to see your original work!
Spacy-Book-Nerd chapter 23 . 6/6/2011
This story was so easy to enjoy, and at times it was so endearing it made me want to go Awwwwww. Was really amazing to read a whole other angle on the character that everyone has been enthralled with at least once in their life.
KatMulligan chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
HI again! I completely forgot to mention this, but I cried when Knock died. The whole scene blew me away. As a side note, the sequel is fantastic as well...
KatMulligan chapter 23 . 5/22/2011
This story was amazing.I loved how you incorporated everything from the name "Pan" to the dredging, to the sounding Kensington, and all the backstories. I also loved the storyteller idea. It was, quite frankly, THE best story I have read on this site. Not even kidding. If you could publish it, I would buy it for me and all my friends, it's jus that good. The one thing that disappointed me was that Peter never got Wendy a star. Other than that, it was absolutely amazing.
Ichitoko chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Absolutely lovely story that I read completely in about a day. C:
Whatever95 chapter 23 . 1/17/2011
I just have to say (and I'm surprised that I didn't review before) I simply loved this story. It made me cry, it made me happy and I just adored the characters and how you wrote them. I was glued to my screen. I do believe that you are a very talented writer and deserve a lot more notoriety. (Heh, I just can't stop gushing. :) )

Thank you so much for writing!

Vaelynne chapter 23 . 1/12/2011
I have to say i am thoroughly impressed with this story. i loved it, it was clever.
J.L. Lofthouse chapter 23 . 12/19/2010
Okay so after reading this story of yours i have only one thing to say, AMAZING! You have no idea how much i have loved to read this story I mean i stayed up till 4:30am reading cause i couldn't seem to stop reading. You have no idea how much i cried when Knock died. This is one of the best- no THE best story i have read, seriously. I hope this will come out in a book because trust me i would definatly buy it. I thought Wendy would go home you know like in the original, and im so glad she didn't, i loved how you have pictured Peter too. Well i could go on and on but it will just be about how amazing this is. Good Work i'm glad i read this.
R.I.N. Natsume chapter 23 . 11/11/2010
This is a remarkable story, I hope you are aware of this! I swear on all that is holly and fan-fiction, that you had me in tears at knock's untimely death. I could find not one mistake in it this entire story! The language was beautiful and you made each character stand out on its own almost if they were really alive. I never stopped reading it for a second, and even after my fifth time of reading it I was still on the edge of my seat. The whole storyline felt complete and I really never saw one hole in the plot, which I know I said earlier but I shell say it again! Its such a masterpiece! I don't think I've been touched by a story like this in a very long time. This story is truly original and it unnerves me to know why there is such a lack of reviews, even as I type I am sending out emails for my friends to read this story...But it only proves you to be a strong writer to continue even with the lack of reviews.

I have fallen deeply in love with this story I just cannot help asking if there is a possible sequel to this? I see some ways you could carry it on from here, and lets be honest here and say that that peck on the cheek was not enough. Yes, I am completely aware that this story isn't in the romance category, which it should be for then I would have had an easier time in finding it, but still it tugged at my heart strings for there to be no utterance of a 'I love you peter' or 'I care about you very much Wendy'. Yes, I am aware I am overly romantic...But anyway I would love to see if you would make a sequel to this one!

-Your truly, Rin Natsume.
Callimari chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
one word.


[erase the (dots). i have to put those in or else the site eats it.]

yeah, i reviewed that last chapter too, but i forgot about the dots thing. but SERIOUSLY! you should put it up there!

ok. i'll stop bothering you now.
Callimari chapter 23 . 7/29/2010
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! *huge thunderous applause ensues*

That was amazing. it really was. i loved every word in it.I'm amazed it only has, what 20 reviews? try putting it on , under the peter pan category. or maybe you already did that. i dunno. but i guarantee more people would be reading it. are you going to do a sequel? (PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE.)Cuz that'd be, y'know... REALLY REALLY FRIGGIN AWESOME IN SO MANY WAYS.


just saying, i really really loved this story, and i;ll probably re read it alot. (i dunno why some people dont like to re read stories. maybe its just me. but i love a good re reading. i always miss something the first time around.)


WerewolfLover chapter 23 . 7/19/2010
I absolutely LOVED this story and I'm really sad that its over. I love Peter Pan stories, and yours is one of the best and creative re-tellings of the story that I've ever read.
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