Reviews for Double Play
Amythesica chapter 9 . 9/29/2016
I love the story! I just have one question... did you post this story on a website called quizazz/quotev? Because i remember reading this years ago on that website...
SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 27 . 6/24/2013
Ahh, I love this story! So cute.

Must admit I got annoyed at some chappies, as I just wanted them to GET TOGETHER! But over all lovely!

Amazing vocab, synatax and grammar!
SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
"more frantically", no, no, NEVER.

Apart from this I loved this chapter, (2), the way you narrated them acting is amazing, and very descriptive.
SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
I love this plot idea and story, the characters and writing.
But, ugh, your uses of tenses is HORRIBLE!

For example:
"Jemma is an awesome friend though her comments could really bite."

Should be: Jemma is an awesome friend though her comments CAN really bite.

And: "It's not my fault that my mom has horrible tastes in clothing anyway."

Should be: It's not my fault that my mom has horrible TASTE in clothing anyway.

You are mixing present tense and past and words that don't exist!


Anyhow, James' point of view was spot on, it didn't seem like a girl wrote it at all, it wasn't unrealistic and I really liked it.
Gabriella F chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
One word- Amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Absolutely FANTASTIC, you are a great writer, I've read almost every single story you posted and I loved them. Please keep writing :) *hugs*
Ryzxn chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Beautiful. That's all there is to it.
bookworm3497 chapter 12 . 3/21/2012
I wish i was a girl ?

oh god I died laughing right when I read that. awesome story!
Bubbly Girl chapter 29 . 3/5/2012
Great story! :) I had the song Ours by Taylor Swift running through my head for this whole chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
Ice Bubble chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
I'm loving this already!
Gnomie chapter 12 . 9/6/2011
Your sooooo lucky i hv eleven chapters nd 0 reviewers :'(
mybeachhouse chapter 31 . 8/17/2011
Aaaahhh! I loove you sooo much for writing this story!

It was amazing and a fun to read. Can't wait to check out your other works! Hugsss!xx
ALastGoodbye chapter 32 . 8/7/2011
I just wanted to say that I REALLY love your story! I could really feel Eliza and James' pain while reading their P.O.V.'s. Great story! Continue to write amazing stories!
Arabella Knightfair chapter 31 . 6/14/2011
Loveed it!

I have to say at times I found it as if the chapters were only about how they felt and not the plot though. But then at other times I liked that.

I think maybe they fell for each other a little too fast though. Then the rest of the story was them in denial about their feelings. I felt as if there needs to be another layer. Something's missing.

From one the the first chapters I had the impression Eliza's friends were going to get together with James' friends. But it never really happened.

But I still enjoyed it!
There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 31 . 4/8/2011
hehe i love it!

i hope you finish the sequel!

love you x
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