| Reviews for Double Play |
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   Amythesica chapter 9 . 9/29/2016 I love the story! I just have one question... did you post this story on a website called quizazz/quotev? Because i remember reading this years ago on that website... |
| SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 27 . 6/24/2013 Ahh, I love this story! So cute. Must admit I got annoyed at some chappies, as I just wanted them to GET TOGETHER! But over all lovely! Amazing vocab, synatax and grammar! |
| SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 2 . 6/4/2013 "more frantically", no, no, NEVER. Apart from this I loved this chapter, (2), the way you narrated them acting is amazing, and very descriptive. |
| SecondsTillWakingHour chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 I love this plot idea and story, the characters and writing. - But, ugh, your uses of tenses is HORRIBLE! For example: "Jemma is an awesome friend though her comments could really bite." Should be: Jemma is an awesome friend though her comments CAN really bite. And: "It's not my fault that my mom has horrible tastes in clothing anyway." Should be: It's not my fault that my mom has horrible TASTE in clothing anyway. You are mixing present tense and past and words that don't exist! - Anyhow, James' point of view was spot on, it didn't seem like a girl wrote it at all, it wasn't unrealistic and I really liked it. |
| Gabriella F chapter 1 . 2/5/2013 One word- Amazing! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 Absolutely FANTASTIC, you are a great writer, I've read almost every single story you posted and I loved them. Please keep writing :) *hugs* |
| Ryzxn chapter 1 . 7/3/2012 Beautiful. That's all there is to it. |
| bookworm3497 chapter 12 . 3/21/2012 I wish i was a girl ? oh god I died laughing right when I read that. awesome story! |
| Bubbly Girl chapter 29 . 3/5/2012 Great story! :) I had the song Ours by Taylor Swift running through my head for this whole chapter! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
| Ice Bubble chapter 3 . 12/31/2011 I'm loving this already! |
| Gnomie chapter 12 . 9/6/2011 Your sooooo lucky i hv eleven chapters nd 0 reviewers :'( |
| mybeachhouse chapter 31 . 8/17/2011 Aaaahhh! I loove you sooo much for writing this story! It was amazing and a fun to read. Can't wait to check out your other works! Hugsss!xx |
| ALastGoodbye chapter 32 . 8/7/2011 I just wanted to say that I REALLY love your story! I could really feel Eliza and James' pain while reading their P.O.V.'s. Great story! Continue to write amazing stories! |
| Arabella Knightfair chapter 31 . 6/14/2011 Loveed it! I have to say at times I found it as if the chapters were only about how they felt and not the plot though. But then at other times I liked that. I think maybe they fell for each other a little too fast though. Then the rest of the story was them in denial about their feelings. I felt as if there needs to be another layer. Something's missing. From one the the first chapters I had the impression Eliza's friends were going to get together with James' friends. But it never really happened. But I still enjoyed it! |
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 31 . 4/8/2011 hehe i love it! i hope you finish the sequel! love you x |