I'm literally rolling all over the floor laughing right now. This chapter was hilarious! You captured the accent perfectly. Gotta love Joe.

You haven't a clue as too how many times I've read this. It's one of the very veiw stories which to me had a satisfying conclusion. Usually I don't have a hard time giving my long reviews but I'm srruggling a bit to say what I liked so much about this story. Now that I've con figured my thought lets get this on with: the number one aspect that attracted me to this is that this plot involves an arranges marriage which is one of my favorite story lines which should be used morw often. Of course I wouldn't like myself to be forced into a loveless marriage unless there was a garentee that it would end with love. Another reason as to why the fiction appealed to me is because it has an asian backround that barely any original fictions on this site or on any other sites have, it's refreshing. Its not one of those annoying ones where its written by some person who likes anime and thinks they can totally speak japanese and basicly fill the whole dialouge with romaji that no one can understand. I'm not trying to be offensive towards anyone who does write this way but those are just a major turn off. It might intrest other just not myself. Anywho great job with this and I hope you continue writing as well as imorove your skills. :9

Haha I just realized...that review wasn't short at all, wasn't it? Lol. It's short compare to some of the ones I write... )

I normally write like super long reviews since I'm a bit of a talker (I'm not going to even bother denying it), but since I'm feeling like such a lazy butt at the moment and I'm HUNGRY and need to get food, I'll keep this review short:

Glad things worked out with Sophie and Landon ) I was a little worried when they weren't going to get married for a second there, but I had no doubts that things would work out since I just had a feeling that this story would have a happy ending. And Chase is a cute name for their kid. It just seems so...fitting lol. "all the girls will chase after him". Nice ;)

I really really liked your story. Great job. You deserve a lot more reviews.

:D Aw. I liked the ending. :) It was really cute how they argued during her labor. :D

I'm kinda sad that this ended, but then I'm happy that it ended well. :D

:( They're not getting married anymore! D: Aw. She told him how she felt and he didn't say anything! :((

Oh no. D:

She has to marry him if she loves him! It's pretty obvious that Landon has feelings for her too.

I hope they do get married. Even if they aren't forced to. D:

Aw, they're so cute. :)

"Those thin pair of post-it notes you call lips?" I couldn't help but laugh when I read this.

The comments and comebacks they throw at each other are hilarious. :))

It's a wonderful story. You deserve more reviews, in my opinion. :)

your story was so heart warming in the middle and i absolutely loved very minute oh it - lily

I don't want this to finish ( aww well stories always end

Aww, He's hurt :(

I'm still gasping for air after reading that hilarious epilogue! D Aha, I honestly think that'll be me one day and I feel absolutely sorry for the asshole that knocks me up (also known as my husband). P

Anyways, I came across this story yesterday and only began reading a couple of chapters before it was beddie-bye for me (it was one AM in the morning). So, all day at school today, I was absolutely anxious to get home and finish Fall For Me, which I did in several hours in between homework! D

You are an absolutely amazing author and I hope you continue on writing. It's been a while since I've last read a story from you... since Nothing Is Forever and that was two years ago, I believe. So, imagine my giddiness when I came across Fall For Me!

I'm actually really surprised that you didn't receive more reviews (if I had it my way, it'd probably be in the hundreds, maybe even thousands); like I said, I'm in love with this story! )

Keep on writing,

~ xShortie4Lifex