Reviews for Do You Have a Staring Problem, or is it Just Me?
neeavila chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I think this is really sweet and well written. And how the story's based on your life makes it better, in my opinion.
Unfortunately, I'm usually the one doing the staring so I can't share a similar experience or anything, haha.
GingerNeverDies chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Omg! This is my life as of right now minus the whole confession part! No kidding, it irritates me so badly he will sit In class and watch me.. Very cOnfusing.
3NoOrdinaryUnicorn3 chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Haha, I love how Jessica has a sort of ADHD sort of thing. xD

That was really cute, and I have to say that, yeah, that's kind of my life too, minus the basketball games and the confessions.

Keep on writing!
Admins Pls Delete Me chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
That was cute and funny! I have never had an experience like that, at all. So really good story!
WishBlade chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I'm back. Third review today! This is funny and cute, and it's based off of a TRUE STORY! GASP. Go talk to the boy! Well, I completely understand if you don't, because I myself would be way too scared to do that. But yeah. Again, awesome story!
dancing-in-the-silverain chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I love this story, it was really sweet! Glad to know I'm not the only one who has some seriously crazy things running through my head at times. Jess's thoughts were even stranger than mine. It had some laugh out loud moments at some of her thoughts and I liked how it seemed slightly less formal because of this. It was easier to relate to her because of the style of the writing. Really good job, well done.

If you feel like it I think you should continue it, even if it's just to make it a two-shot.
xXxXDarkAngelXxXx chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Oh! I liked this. A. Lot. It was fun to read. Yay! Good Job!

Peace Love & Smiles- Danielle Nicole(:
queenjade chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
aw this is soo sweet :D

i love jess..the feisty, bold, crazy jess :)

and Jake... i love him :D

You are the queen of one shots :)


Ardendale chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
There's a guy in my English class just like this. He sits across the room and never talks but for the entire hour stares like there's no tomorrow. Hahaha, it was great. :)
BowlerHatGuy chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
HAHAHAHA I LOVED IT! it was wonderfully cute, and you're reader/author comunication was brilliant :D thanks for writing this :D

Artume chapter 1 . 3/4/2010

That must be creepy, having a guy stare at you. Thankfully (I wrote Sadly first...I think I'M a looney bin escapee) I don't have any such problem. There were a couple of grammatical mistakes...I noticed a period instead of a question mark, and an extra word in a sentence. Uh,

"Hadn't I wanted to know if he liked me or not."

I can't find the extra word one. I really liked this one, though, however creepy it is in Real life. Lol.
kalianne900 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Cute story ) I like how you maintained the narrator's characterization the whole way through. I would really like to see this more fleshed out.

One quibble though: In the first paragraph just after the opening dialogue you refer to the boy as Josh, not Jake. Just so you know.
SandPaperWishesAndDreams chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
WOW! amazing story, and totally relatable!
Water Colours chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Your awesome! I'm sorry but GAH

I was just reading and I realized this is exactly how I act!

I'm not the only one :]

I also love it when people write like this.. .:D

Okay I'm a dork and I should probably moving along by now


Awesome story :]]
sea of monsters chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Really cute :) I like the humour in it.

Update please.
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