Reviews for Eden's Fall
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Woah, that was the most amazing poem I've ever read. It has such great imagery and is so well written!
The One and Only Cactus Woman chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
It was so well written! Absolutely amazing imagery. Although, it was a little to long for my liking. But I read it all anyway, that's how awesome it was. Heh heh.
Eternal Note chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Its so long.

But its really well writen
Ebrethiel chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
This was a complete joy to read (at least the parts I was bothered to read). I would read the entire poem, but I have some writing of my own to do :P

Your choice of words astounds me; completely boggles my mind.

A very coherent and flowing read.

" ... pouring crimson blood

onto soft untouched wool, tinting it with

sin, blossoming red from the wound until

the diminutive form is devoid of life,

so did the red wine trickle across the floor. "

That has to be my favourite part. *applause*