my anime friend:you are very talented and yes i am vey proud of you and your beautiful ( some times depressing :p) poems great writer!

IT WAS NICE BUT CLICHE

Aaw... :]

Short poem. Good poem.

I can't condone your use of "giving someone away". It doesn't sound right in my head. As though you "own" someone or they're an old plush toy that you want to get rid of.

Other than that, it was interesting.

Awesome. Thanks for the shout out.