Beautiful. Sad and haunting but beautiful.

Your work is awesome i can't believe someone can write this good :)

Don't give upp

I like the way you've finished this off. The whole thing in general has been improved greatly. There is clear direction, without a lack of structure. Perfect. (:

wow this is soo good

cool poem

Magic isn’t that dramatic... Unless you are fooling around.

However I like how the piece is written, the piece has a nice flow.