|Reviews for Swirly, Bright Entity|
| Ruby Earlson chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Beautiful. Sad and haunting but beautiful.
| sammy chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Your work is awesome i can't believe someone can write this good :)
Don't give upp
| cassie chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I like the way you've finished this off. The whole thing in general has been improved greatly. There is clear direction, without a lack of structure. Perfect. (:
| maria chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
wow this is soo good
| Eternal Note chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
| Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Magic isn’t that dramatic... Unless you are fooling around.
However I like how the piece is written, the piece has a nice flow.