:'( I normally don't read poems, but I really liked this one! Poor boy I'm crying with you! Good job E!

I think this is your best poem. it's realy good. I love the rhyming and that one line that isnt a part of the poem. ill favourite you when i make an account

Paul you are absolutley awesome and i definetley will buy your books one day. this poem is wonderful i would love to know exaclty what your inspiration is. Congratulations on such a well written poem and i believe that a lot of people can relate to this poem in their own way. so never give up keep writing u always have my support :D

tc mwa

omgg this poemm is awesomee

how can someone right like thiss

Ebrethiel you sure have talent keep up the worrkk

It's so sweet and sad and I like it a lot :]

wow thats areally nice poem it makes u want to cry

I like this one very muchly. (: Very, very well written.

Nice chapter