cute story

This is adorable and made me laugh out loud more than a few times! And I love love love how you made the whole thing seem like a video game ] Awesome one-shot!

Cute. I used to obsessed with my game oy and 64. Long live mario cart. :)

This was really cute. I wonder how many readers out there actually know what an Atari gaming system is?

I loved how she kept comparing Logan to Sonic, in a way it almost foreshadowed that fact that he was probably going to end up winning, even though he lost all of his lives.

I loved the part at the end when he became all embarrassed and wasn't sure what to do. It's sad he had to resort to tactics like bets and lies, but I can see how there wasn't any other way to get her to talk.

The only part I'm not sure about is when you introduce the character Jessica. I know she provides the gossip, but I'm not sure if it's necessary, since Reid doesn't take it seriously at all.

Anyway, it was a cute little story and I really enjoyed reading it.

Interesting that you dont have that many reviweres. Very interesting and good writing too. I will try your other stories as well.

Good that I found you.