Reviews for Looking In the Mirror
Ashley chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
This is really good. I know how you feel...it's horrible when you care so much for someone and they dont seem to care. All you get is excuses and they just string you along by playing on your emotions. It sucks to be so vulnerable and have someone take advantage of that. You may not have been in the same situation I mentioned...but that's what I remembered through your poem. Really good writing.
fictionalxbliss chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
That was beautiful and sad at the same time. I loved the beat of the poem. Very nice writing!
sealednectar chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
This was good. I was wondering who was speaking and then I realised it was the same person. I really liked it. It's true. I didn't like the use of ellipses after each line though. Overall, good job:)