Reviews for Epiphany
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I love that first line. The contradiction really made me read it twice and definitely made we want to read more of the piece. I think it works well with the end because it seems their words contradict their actions. The only thing is I wish there was a bit more to it. I would like to know a bit more about their relationship and what happened.

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LittlePieceLove chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Oh so true.

I love this, made me think really hard about the words I say when I include "forever" in them.

Beautiful.
Mirabella chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Nicely rhymed. And well portrayd. :)