|Reviews for AdventOrderStory|
| Lightdreamer chapter 5 . 1/17/2012
Even with all the spelling errors and grammar mistakes that this story has, I'm still touched by Elhaym's death.
I'm still befuddled on how an author could write his story until the 71th chapter with only 3 reviews, so I guess I'll just give one of my own.
I hope you'll finish this story because it will be really sad if you'll just abandon it after working on it for so long.
| zinsama chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
I can see the concept of this story has great potential but you need to brush up on your grammar! R&R my story please? （）
| mack chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Mate you story is good but you need to have it proof read, learn to use punctuation, grammar and learn how to spell.
| lili999 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
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