Reviews for Soul Traider
Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Wow, I am very impressed by this story! What jumps right out at me is how visual you are - the first few paragraphs are clearly almost like "pictures" painted by an artist. Whereas in my stories dialogue is always my most natural way to tell the story, you really show the story in flashes of imagery, and it's really exciting!

I can also see you have a much more Sci Fi background than me. My Sci Fi knowledge is very old and dodgy, mostly from movies forty years ago like STAR TREK or PLANET OF THE APES. Your ideas and concepts are really up to date!