m i hope i get preggo...btw awesome story :)

ducky ducky masschetus circus fly, let the bodies hit the floor, let the bodies hit the floor...fart.

ooh, this one's a keeper. I love the descriptions you give. Some authors go way over the top, so it's all your reading and some just give the basic plot. But you manage to give details at just the right moments - the flooding, the new house, the bridge - though nothing unnecessary. I'm totally bookmarking this.

~Emma

oh, epic beginning. I can't wait to read on.

~Emma