Reviews for Cami
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I like the play on cami and camisole. It was a great play on words. Only thing is how would a camisoule be bohemian? It's an odd description for a camisole. One that I can't picture.

The alliteration with the c words in the beginning was good too though it just seemed to stop. I kinda wished it had carried through the piece 'cause with just half it seems a bit awkward.

I also liked the ending. Definitely could picture that though and it makes you wondering why the makeup thing is so important. Nice job.

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she smolders chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
You say a lot in four lines, I like that.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
"Catches clicks from the camera through her eyes." This is a very striking image; awesome 'c' alliteration too.
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Short, but says all that needs to be said. I like the last line. "without makeup" makes me think of showing one's true self.