Reviews for Camouflage
Violettree chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Great job on this poem. Keep writing!
Ayx chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I really love this piece.

You say all you have to say

right in those few lines.

The beginning was familiar

but, the ending definately

made it unique.

Ayx
Isca chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I like the lines "devoid of adornment" and "ego hungry mind refuses to become enlightened to the true self" the best. The first because it's elegant & the latter because it's quite Freudian. :)
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
short, but it shows humanity as we know it. last few lines are my favourite.
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
A poignant poem. It's so true. I like the "twistedly-rooted tree" part.