Damn, that was good. Really vivid description, I felt like I was right there next to him, waiting for my turn to die. Really liked the part about feeling like a snail inside the wet trench. Also liked your thoughts on the materialistic purposes of war. I really hope to read more from you.

Oh, and thanks a bunch for the story alert and fave on The Eternal Divinity :)

Aw this make's me sad! Poor soldier! Does he ever get to see his family? lol :D

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