|Reviews for empty condolences & halfhearted pats on the back|
| theycallmetalljake chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I have to say I'm touched my this. It's so true. It was intense and I just thought your work choice was incredible and your imagery was outstanding.
| recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
wow that was intense. i love the diction in this piece - the lack of punctuation just makes everything kind of rush in the end. it mimics the stream of consciousness which I found suited the subject matter. nice work.