|Reviews for twins|
| Not Abigale chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I had to read it twice, but I'm sure you're tired of hearing that. It was beautiful, although I didn't get everything, but than again, I'm sure that was intentional. I understood most of it and that's what's important. I like it. I'm going to steal your brain one day and see if there's any way for me to use it as my own.
| Nariki chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I had to reread it a few times before i understood it, but overall, it was a good .
| The-One-With-The-Scythe chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
It kinda made me cry. Also did they have sex and did Innocence feel guilty for Loyal's pain? That was beautiful. I liked it all but only understood a good 80%.
| damnhammer chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Very,very beautiful and deep, too. Great job!;)
| lexi v chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
the way you have managed to tell such a clear story and fit so much emotion into such a brief piece of writing really says alot for your skill as a writer in my opinion.
good job. :)
| Chasmodai Blue chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
I think I understood about 70 percent of that, but I liked 99 percent of it, and I believe this counts for something.
You make me so jealous. Goddamn you.