Reviews for Bittersweet Lullaby: Surrender
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 4 . 3/14/2010
Great!
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 3 . 3/14/2010
Love the imagery!
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
Great!
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Love it! :)
Isca chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
"The tide rushes in - slow suffocation." Wow. I like the "drowning" imagery here - it's so striking! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I like the subtle internal rhyming in the first stanza between "to pieces" and "her screeches." It really made this stanza flow nicely.

"It catches in my throat." Angsty. Raw. I like it. :)