Reviews for Simmer (original) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dude seriously this is one of the awesomest stories I have ever laid eyes on and seriously have you ever considered publishing? Because these stories are too awesome to simply be on FicPress! :D I love love love your story SOOO MUCH ! :DDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm writing this review because seeing as you're deleting your stories, I just wanted you to know. this was the first story I ever read on fictionpress, that I actually enjoyed and got unnaturally obsessed with. I fell in love with the plot, the characters, all of the story. If this story wasn't up all those months ago, I probably wouldn't have continued to read fictionpress stories. I respect your decision to delete it as wish you the best in the future. but just to let you know, I'll always be a fan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! Best story I have read on this entire website! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I heart this story. It's really good. So is Ryan popular? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Livvy, Just wanted to pop in and leave a quick review. I've been reading this story over the course of about four days now and I just finished this afternoon. I have to say I was pleasantly impressed with it. When I first clicked on, I expected something kind of fluffy and playful with a mix of supernatural in it (guess I should've paid closer attention to the genre labels when I clicked, right?) It was dark and twisted and mischievous and captivating, all with the humourous narration of an entertaining narrator and the bittersweet undertones of forbidden passion. In short, I feel like this story is what Twilight could have been if Twilight had been good. The right amount of light and dark, with a dramatic climax that had my pulse racing and a conclusion that was satisfying while still leaving a hope for the future. The romance didn't have some magical fix-all at the end which was wonderfully refreshing. Your characters were quirky and yet still believably real. A very good story and I look forward to starting on the sequel soon. - Artie Rayne |
![]() ![]() ![]() i agree with cole why hasnt she told somebody? the pictures could have been used as evidence and stuff so was all the passion just because her blood smells good? so if his vampire side drinks blood what about his wolf side? isnt that side repulsed by it? and how he did he come to be anyways arent vamps n weres sworn enemies? i wonder who else is a werewolf n got offended by her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the hell? who is watching her? and what is up- with brady n cole? |
![]() ![]() I WANT THAT SEGUEL! I did not just read this whole thing to stop and never know what happens? Especialyy since she is a different kind of human, special amelia and tristan called her. I want to know why and if she could possibly be a supernatural. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MUST HAVE A SEQUEL! PRETTY PLEASE! DON"T DO THIS TO US! I AM BAWLING MY EYES OUT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha! so I was reading the last bit of this story and someone like you by adele popped into my head. lol your story was amazing! i couldnt get away from my computer cuz i just had to read it all. well, I'm off to read the sequel! keep up the amazingness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it! The chemistry between Cole and Ryan is amazing! You have major talent! |
![]() ![]() I love the fact that I'm two chapters into your story and Im already hooked. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic. I love it. The last scene was just...wow. I can't even think of the words to describe it. PLEASE do a sequel. |
![]() ![]() Okay. I love ending like these. D'you wanna know why? It's 'cause I know someone will write a sequel so *hugs* for doing so. :) Lovely story. :D Maybe lovely is the wrong word. :P |
![]() ![]() You know whats funny?, I clearly remember being on chapter 20 something and I was reading and reading and the next thing I know it was the end. Like whoa, you got me so hooked I didnt even noticed anything. This was a great story, hope you finish the sequel to it soon. |