Reviews for When you pass me by
KimYo chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I can relate to this. good job :) it's sort of like the 50/50 thing in relationships. you don't wanna be the only one contributing and trying to put in work, but if you don't even put in the work to even start the relationship, then there's no use in the other person trying to put in work because then it'll only be 30/70 and that's not cool.
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
That was so amazing... I can completely relate to it... Great job!
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
I love the message behind this. However I just wanted to jump out and grab the subject and tell her to man up and make the first move. Men are dumb :) us women have to tell them what we want or they never catch on. Cowgirl up, grab the bull by the horns and make the first move. life is short and u only live once. do what makes u happy :) loved the poem dear it was beautiful