Reviews for First Impressions
momo3069 chapter 8 . 1/26/2011
This story is way to short for me. I like the Sallinger Sisters. So I hope to find the next story complete soon.
Astarael-11 chapter 8 . 9/6/2010
Hey Clavie!

Oh my gosh, I have missed your stories so much! I know that I reviewed up to chapter two but then I got really busy with uni and things, I'm so sorry. I haven't stopped thinking about your stories though!

Anyway, I loved it (as always). And I also see that you have another story up (yay!) that means that I have more reading to do. Hopefully I can get a chance to catch up with it.

But yes, sorry, rambling, it was great, I loved it and I really can't wait for the next two stories in this series.

carly chapter 8 . 4/28/2010
hi! i have been reading your stories for almost 5 yrs now and this story disappointed me. here are a few things to hopefully make it better:

1. there's too much going on. we have 3 sisters but it is so confusing! at the start of the story it seemed to concentrate on the 3 sisters and their guardian then shifted to the relationship then the wedding. make it streamlined you can have a more cohesive story with all of this going on you just have to edit well.

2. you did not establish the characters well. i cant even tell the characters apart. sure they have one unique quality but thats it. they are kinda shallow. so add more depth in their characteristics.

3. you have amazing ideas but you don't expres the story quite as well. i think you have more in you. you just have to push and do really well! elaborate all chapters seem rushed. honestly your stories are deteriorating. your first few stories may not have such a nice idea as your later ones but it was written better!
chng234 chapter 8 . 4/27/2010
tat the end? update soon.
momo3069 chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
Ahh, how sweet. Where did you get all your ideas?
chng234 chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
i believe they need to tell allie the truth soon
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 6 . 4/12/2010
haha that was great
alakazam05 chapter 6 . 4/12/2010
When is this story going to be about Simon and Emmy?
chng234 chapter 6 . 4/12/2010
i was surprised that liz n harry r getting married. kinda a bit fast
a little girl chapter 6 . 4/12/2010
cant wait for the next chapter :)
tamii chapter 6 . 4/12/2010
I don't know why Simon is so angry. Is it possible that he has begun to care for all of them? *gasps* No! Haha.

Emmy and Simon seem to be at each other's throats constantly which reinforces my view that they will be a couple since they are the only ones who can control each other. I know it's possible that they are related but... it's only a possibilty - right?

I really want to find out whether Allie is their sister or not but I like the little subplots you throw in there.

Update soon!
g chapter 6 . 4/11/2010
lol, simon's temper tantrums are funny and annoying at the same time.
J.Szewczuk chapter 5 . 4/11/2010
Another great story. I really like that you have multiple romances going on at once. Can't wait to read more!

- C.C.
tamii chapter 5 . 4/11/2010
You know, I thought that Emmy and Simon would be the first to make a couple. Now that they might be related... not too sure. Are all of the sisters going to have a happy ending? I hope so! I like that Liz isn't the classic cliched character -she's not afraid to say what's on her mind.

I noticed that this chapter is incredibly short especially when compared to some of your other stories!

Update soon, please :)
a little girl chapter 5 . 4/4/2010
next chapter please :) cant wait :)
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