next next :) pls update soon :)

off to the next chapter :) yay yay yay! :)

hope things will end well in the end for all of them

The frustrating thing about reading stories as they first come out is that you have to wait for the next chapter. the good thing is, theres that excitement and anticipation of eagerly awaiting that next chapter. :D

on a more serious note, this story is very good, but could use some tweaks. I would offer my help, to just read them over and let you know what i think, but i don't know if you want that, or already have somebody doing it for you.

If you are interested, let me know. my favorite subject is english, and i'm that person at the library with a stack of books over her head she reads so much xD

let me know, i'm a fan of your work, so no harm intended with the offer, just thought I could be helpful :)

keep up the good work!

I always thought Simon and Emmy were going to end up together... Hmm. Another little twist. I hope all the girls end up happy :)

i hope everything will tun out fine

Wait.. i dont get it? So what exactly happened? and who's related to who?

Allie is Simon's half sister? and adopted sister? Cousin?

I am really confused...

loved it

lovelovelove it!

cant wait for more

i wonder wat will happen next

You updated!

Great chapter, can just see the blossoming romance now. *sighs*

Great work, update soon :)

Oh, this is sounding good. I love how all of them seem to be such good friends (I mean, I guess that was the point but you know) and I'm liking Simon already. Although he seems a bit put out about having the girls stay with him, he seems really cool.

Anyway, all that amounts to is me saying that I loved that chapter and can't wait to read more!

I'm excited that you've started a new story! I've read most of your others! This looks to be a good one :)

let's see what kinda plan they make

can't wait for the next chapter :)

i wonder wat he intend to do