|Reviews for First Impressions|
| NV12 chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
could you possibly not make the chapters longer?
| RMB4 chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
I am all excited you started writing a new story again. Thusfar I have loved most of what you have written so I am pretty sure this one will be good as well!
| a little girl chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
interesting :) please update soon :)
| Astarael-11 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Eek oh my gosh, another Clavie historical romance! I'm so happy and excited and very much in love with all the characters already.
Sigh, I'm so glad to be reading another one of your stories Clavie, I've missed them.
But anyway, that was a great start. I can't wait to see what happens next and to see how the others will meddle in the affairs because that's always the fun part :D
| punkproud chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
loving this new story
can't wait for the next chapter :)
| lizzie chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
I've been waiting for another of your story, and to continue with this one is absolutely amazing.
Hope you'll keep updating SOON!
| Poetess111 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
SO EXCITED! I can't wait to see how this goes. I'd like a description of the hall that they're standing in at the end. : ) Can't wait to see more!
| noriepie chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Is this sequel to a previous fantastic story?
I have a feeling it could possibly be.
*off to find story*
ps: Cornwall to London in a CARRIAGE? Whoa these girls have been through a lot. And ths story is so promising, I'm wondering which sister will be with lord dressden: Emily or Liz lol
and it's a bit like lil women isn't it? With the whole sisters dynamics. I could be completely wrong on mostly bcuz I haven't picked up LW for so long.
Anywho...three cheers for an amazing first chapter. Now I myself want a brew and sandwiches like those girls had
| J.Szewczuk chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Can't wait to see where you are going with this. I assume Dressden is going to fall in love with one of them?
| dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
The story looks promising so far! :D Can't wait to read what happens next.
the only critique I can come up with is that there are too many characters introduced too fast.. it was a little hard to keep up with all the names and who's who... but i got the hang of it by the end of the chapter... :)
| St. Clair chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Yay - I love historical pieces!
I love the three girls - Emmy, Allie and Liz. I think I favour Allie at the moment purely because of the stomach rumbling incident and her shy little "pardon me" afterwards - though I think Liz's pluckiness is both admirable and likeable for that period, and Emily's nickname (I know that's shallow, but...) of Emmy is cute.
Dressden is interesting. He doesn't seem too 3d at the moment but I trust that it will develop; I can't wait to see more of him because I kind of like him, but then I kind of think he's a douche as well. (But that's a good thing, weirdly - I love them kinda characters) I wonder how Dressden will grow as a character having now been put in this situation.
There were only a few typos, one of them being:
"Our parents have been death for seven years, sir." - dead instead of death
But I can't spot any glaring errors. Though the dialogue is a bit casual for the time, it's not completely modern either so I do get a sense of...well, historicalism. That's probably not a word but I can't think of the right term. ;)
Thanks for sharing - I can't wait to read more!
| HisFiestyBeauty chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Great story so far! I can not wait to read more!
| chng234 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
an interesting chap.. is this a new story for a new series?