Hi CaitieCat,

Good story. I need to wait a few days before I start publishing stuff, but now I have an idea of what you do on this website.

You add a totally new perspective to ducks.

See ya later!

-AwesomeMush

good chapter, it shows that heroes are imperfect. Your character development is very, good, although the length of your chapters leaves me waiting for more. Keep writing!

In other new, you should totally check out my story. I just finished part one and the story is 16,0 words; so I'm kinda worried the length might turn some people off. tell me what you think!

Wow... Sad, but it happens

Woah... major plot twist.

Keep it up, I am enjoying this.

Wow. Great chapter. The ducks beating up on a bunch of guys was classic, especially from Marcy's point of view.

One tip: the words blond and blonde are commonly misrepresented. Blonde with the e, is the feminine form of the word and is used to describe women. blond describes males. As much as it sounds weird, it's the truth: there are two spellings of blond(e) based on gender. Kinda like spanish.

And the whole chapter is underlined and in bold font... are you planning on fixing.

Other than the technical errors, good stuff.

I love how you can give characters a set-in-stone personality almost effortlessly. It makes for good reading.

"Meek Meets Malicious."

Uh oh... major plot twist!

I like the way you describe them using their powers, it seems very natural. And Alice has some major attitude issues.

Oh... super ducks! Lol

Pretty interesting so far, let's see what the next chapters have to hold...

oh and good cliffhanger

Is this supposed to be serious? Because I think the idea of talking ducks is hilarious. Mission Duck is a good title, it was enough to make me click the link, anyway.