Reviews for Cutting Loose Ends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I can completly relate getting close to someone is hard, having them say they love you is hard, and wondering why they seem to be avoiding you is hard. when they comforted u in ur sleep and called it just being there for you, when they wrapped their legs around yours and it felt so right. the problem you're love is considered a sin by the world, and you can't know you truely love someone in 8 days even if you HAD met them in a dream before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable to read. ) I found that the words really flowed and I liked the emotion in the poem. One thing, did you maybe mean "You were in love, I was in hate"? Just wondering. Keep up the good work though. I'll be looking at your other poems. ) |