Reviews for I bet you're proud of what you've done
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is short but holds a lot in it.

I like the repetition of broken me.

Nicely written
ByYourSide chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
I also read your most recent poem, and I have to say: I really really like your poems. I like... the rhythm, the flow, the melody. They're so different from a lot of poems I've read. You seem like a really creative person.

This poem just flows together really well and in a creative way, in my opinion, although I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe because you use simple words to convey ideas clearly-you do that very well-or maybe because of the repetition of "broken me."

My favorite part:

and all that escapes

my lips are broken


The lines flow together impeccably well. Amazing. -love-