|Reviews for The maiden stirs in his arms|
| dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Lovely meter. Reminds me of a more old-timey sort of writing. Quite beautiful.
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Very nice. Highly sensual verging on the erotic, without going over the line. Just teasingly descriptive enough to make us wonder if the maiden is dreaming or living her fantasy.