|Reviews for Heartbreak Haven|
| thisisbrighteyesx3 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
realy good story talking about a topic that is so true. good job.
| Angelica.Eddings chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
This story caught my eye when I saw the word "Victorian Period" in your summary. I happen to be a big fan of that era :)
Your story is beautifully written, and I think you capture the thoughts of a woman from that period very well. The only thing that I can suggest changing is "And heartbreak is socially unacceptable under the reign of Victoria."
It feels as if she somehow knows that heartbreak is acceptable after the Victorian period. I'd suggest rewriting it to show how she laments how heartbreak is unacceptable in her society.
Good luck! :)
This story definitely deserves a place in my historical romances community.