Reviews for The Romantic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() like it :) ned to know what happens next :D! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its great theres 1 typo at the end of the chapter it should be drive not dive other than that its good |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! great chappy have a good week |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool...but why the three month skip? I can't say much about the chapter, it's kinda short(hint, hint)...but I'm still interested we learn a little bit more about the new kid...I'm curious about the whole court thing, how old is the cousin. -Im Just Mlssundaztood |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending kinda got an internal "Aw" out of me. How long is this story going to be? |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovelovelove it! cant wait for more! hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what happens next! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though you were angry when you wrote this, it doesn't sound like it. This is a great beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the summery. I just had to read it. I like how he thought "she looks natural" instead of JUST saying "She's better looking"...it gives a reason and it's isn't the cliche stupid story where they only talk about how hot the girl character is. She's less fashionable (Stacy's not perfect, good to have faults and/or not being perfect in everything) "She's the better looking one, more natural"-favorite line Basically I'm saying I love the start of this story. Great first chapter. -Im Just Mlssundaztood |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds like a really great story! I totally can't want for the next chapter, and the rest of the book, to see what happens to Stacey! |