Reviews for Longing
Zanza8 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This poem I really liked, especially the line "I impose my solitude upon others" because it seems like that's something people tend to do a lot-impose what they are doing on others. You really seem to have expressed the problem that conflicting desires can create for people and I think about how we could make our lives so much easier if we just stepped back and took a breath. Nice work!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Great job, well done! :-D