Reviews for Conceal
nickyO chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I like the imagery coupled with the lesson in the poem. Good work.

However that being said, why are we superficial at times? What are in those dark clouds? And can it be beneficial sometimes to be superficial?
SilentVoices chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Loved it. Simple. Thought provoking.