|Reviews for Fragmented|
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Geeze thanks for the heads up that you posted something. Guess I'll just have to subscribe to get author alerts. :P But this was really good. Job well done. Keep it Up!
| Anusha chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Davida! That was so strong! Not quite intense because you're not raging against something but still quite emotional. And its so visual, I love that! And this has a great flow to it really, your wordplay is so...good you know? you're amazing girl! :D Honestly, don't you DARE stop writing and posting! :D