Reviews for To Love a Loser
Yellow.Jellow chapter 6 . 8/18/2010
I'm still holding out hope that the note sender and Lee are the same person :D Lots of grammar/typos in here but I'm not going to point them out because you're probably aware that they're there.
Yellow.Jellow chapter 3 . 8/18/2010
I think it just might be me... but it seems pretty obvious that the person sending the notes is Lee, right? I mean, the two notes in the textbook match up with the the times he's given her her stuff... and he's nice to her. But I guess I can kind of see why she wouldn't expect it to be him, she's just a bit too oblivious to be believable.
Yellow.Jellow chapter 2 . 8/18/2010
I like! Only thing is calling the boy's poetry "noise" was a little weird... and disturbing. I re-read it several times before I realized you were just saying he was done reading the poem, ha ha.
nonnimus chapter 7 . 7/3/2010
Hey.. I just found this story today, and it is really good. Read it straight through 7 chapters. You gotta update! I'm still dying to find out who the notes-writer is.
vampireprincess19 chapter 7 . 6/23/2010
yay they are now togther woop!

but who is sending her the letters?

i wanna know!

lykin it so far! x x
Chelseamuffin chapter 7 . 6/12/2010

I am enjoying this more than you can possibly know. I kind of fell in love with Eliza before I knew it. She's just so sad and bullied and awkward and I love her, and I love that she's legit not one of those "I'm actually gorgeous I just don't know it" kinds of fpc girls. I can understand underestimating just how beautiful you are- aka being prettier than you think you are- but not being THE MOST GORGEOUS EVER FR SRS and not knowing it.

(Sorry. Sorry. A little rant.)

I don't care who he is. I have fallen in love with whoever wrote the notes. Part of me still wants to believe that it's Lee, since he seems like such a sweetheart, but a bigger part of me doesn't, because it seems too perfect and nothing else about Liza's life is.

But I don't want Lee to be a bad guy, because I genuinely do like him.

I look forward to the next update. ;)
journeyoflife chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
I really liked it.

it's so cute that they kissed.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
I love the chapter!

But I'm dying to know who sent the notes!

it's like killing me!

please update soon

have a great week
mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
"That's enough to instill a bad idea into a teenage boy's mind." Note to self: Wear longer skirts.

Oscar's hair was fluffed up like Velcro and he smelled strangely of Jell-o and detergent. ROFL!

But where he was feeling rejection I was feeling devious, my mind was racing and for that moment I was in control, I had him. :O She is so evil!

Wow, AWESOME chapter...even though it was short.

And it's totally cool about the wait, writers block is the worst.
morphine and lollipops chapter 7 . 6/5/2010
Hm, I love Lee as the best friend. I love Lee, in general, actually, but Lee and Liza are just best friends. WHO is this mysterious man? Who? TELL ME. Eek, I am impatient. I want to know. This story is great. Eliza is great. You, my friend, are great.


morphine and lollipops chapter 6 . 6/5/2010
I like this, will right more after I finish the 7th chapter, but when it talks about Oscar, and it say Mischa didn't buy it? You have "by" instead of "buy".

But other than that, no errors at all this entire story!
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 7 . 6/5/2010
I can't believe she fainted! lol. What is up with lee? Who is her secret admirer? I still have a guess that it is lee, but that guess is getting dimmer and dimmer. lol. I can't wait to see what happensnext!
Ivix chapter 7 . 6/5/2010
cute story, it is close to the end?
ThatBlondeGirl chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
I liked it. :) Good job, especially for having writer's block!

One thing...who is Oscar? Like was he introduced in an early chapter cuz i didn't remember him?

Anyways, keep up the good work!
sappyromancelvr chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
I keep on wanting to think that he's going to really play here. Then the mysterious guy with the notes will swoop and save her.
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