Reviews for To Love a Loser
on the edge of insanity chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
I actually hate Lee...
Scarlet Dawn chapter 6 . 5/30/2010
This story is amazing. I love Liza and Lee's characteristics. Damn, if they don't get together and knock the French girl outta there, I'll do it myself :D Kidding, I'm just kidding. Anyway, no errors. Awesome plot. Great writing. Update soon.

~ Fia.
Sunshine Bear chapter 6 . 5/28/2010
Don't you hate it when you are reading a really good story and you go to push the 'next chapter' button and there is nothing there?

yeah. Life sucks.
Nice-Girl101 chapter 6 . 5/19/2010
hey awesome story! please please continue writing! i am anxious to find out who her secret admirer is! good job :)
vampireprincess19 chapter 6 . 5/16/2010
aww this is cute u knw :-)

lool at optimistic dt :-D

do update son...i wanna knw if she ends up with lee!

and oh 'That's something else guy's do, they may you lose your mine'... dt didnt make sense... x x
littlemissxx chapter 6 . 5/9/2010
Too cute(:

When I read the first few chapters, I was just dreading the inevitable love the jock and the dork would have. it's so lame.

but you really surprised me D
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 6 . 4/8/2010
Did lee change his hand writing on te two didfferent notes? I can't wait to see what happens next!
BaleighTheMadQueen chapter 6 . 4/6/2010
I really wanted to cry during this but I'm a coldhearted loser so I didn't. I love your story and I've love it if you updated soon. I think it's Lee sending her the note, my handwriting changes all the time why can't his?
mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 6 . 4/6/2010
People are optimistic pessimists. Psh, ain't that the dang truth!

"Don't wish, don't start, wishing only wounds the heart." That's also true. :(

"No matter what, I love you." AW! *dies of cuteness*


Okay, I am SO loving this story!

PS: Gonna have to add my name to the list of reviewers. ;)
mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 5 . 4/6/2010
Tom Cruise, duh. ROFL! I nearly died laughing! I was like: Well, that came out of nowhere!

"Liza, I think I'm in love!" :O What the heck!

"I wanted to kiss you." Eliza, listen to the dude!

we can't have you readers getting too used to fluffy kisses. (: Nope, we can't have that because it would kill us. ;)

Wow, this is most likely the shortest review I've ever written. :/
mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 4 . 4/6/2010
"Be careful, okay." AW! She's looking out for her!

Because cute jocks don't date losers. Ah, c'mon babe, think a little more highly of yourself.

except the few times he was teasing me and telling me how big of a nerd I was for watching the old Pokemon videos I had excitedly found in a box of my old things. Psh, I never liked Pokemon, I like Digimon! :D

The handwriting was always the same, I looked at it before I went to bed at night, and sometimes I would dream that it was Lee who was sending them to me. But I knew it wasn't. UGH! C'MON! It SO IS Lee!

I looked like a football player's girlfriend. EEP! :D

"He wants you to kiss it." Kiss...a helmet! WTH!

"If we win, I want you to kiss me." I guess he'll try hard to win this game, won't he? ;)

mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 3 . 4/6/2010
Then her eyes drifted past me to the other note that was plastered to my wall, she squinted her eyes and read it front afar, after she was finished a small "aww" escaped her lips. Haha! Sounds like something my bff would do. :P

Honestly, it sounds fun at first, but after awhile all you really want is a good homemade meal. I hear that. I remember when my sister was at Summer camp and my mom was sick...all my dad did was order pizza and get hamburgers...I thought I was gonna die. _

I wanted this, I wanted a boy to write me notes and tell me I'm beautiful. Oh my gosh, just what I've been craving. *single .
mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
I am an untold story.

Practiced in the art of lying-

I am a love letter.

Covered in uneven pencil hearts-

I am a poorly written poem.

Filled with too many I love yous and not enough meaning-

I am adoration in every single language.

But I cannot even whisper sweet nothings in your ear. Well hey, that's a thousand times better then I could've done.

Through my broken speakers I could hear the muffled sound of Jimmy Eat World and I felt ashamed of my horrible poem. YAY for Jimmy Eat World! :P

"I know that your hair is not raven, but this poem still reminds me of you." EEP!

I blushed. Oh gosh, older brothers… I swallowed a little nauseous. Heehee! And I don't have one. :P

"Well, quit checking yourself out, we're gonna be late." Haha! Kinda like Jackie on That 70's vain. lol

We took the stairs down to Andy's car- which happens to be a little Toyota something-or-other, the color of macaroni and cheese. LMAO! Mac and cheese? LOL!

"I remember the awkward sex conversation when I was thirteen- it was almost as awkward as my first period which will forever scar me." _ Makes me REALLY glad I have a mom.

"Scar you? I had to buy you some damn tampons." HAHA! Their both scared!

"That's what she said," *rolls eyes* Jerk...

"Parker," the boy paused and gave him the strangest of looks. "Apologize," he commanded. OH! TAKE THAT!

I looked down at my things and saw another bookmark sticking out of my textbook. :D HEEHEE! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I was so skinny that the teachers thought I was malnourished; I had to see a counselor for my "anorexia". Oh my gosh! The same thing happened to my friend. Thing is, she was born premature and has a hard time gaining weight. -.-

"No, I just want all the reasons why I should kill my family written down on paper so the cops will know the horrendous torture I had to live through and why each and every mock is the reason I killed all of you." O.O Shoot...

"It's okay that you don't have a boyfriend, maybe it just means that nobody is good enough for you yet." Aw, that's sweet! .

"We're having Chinese takeout for dinner." Yum! :D

Tyler- tall and lanky with a slight moustache that he was very proud of and aviator sunglasses that made him feel like Hyde from That 70's Show. OH MY GOSH! I LOVE Hyde!

So it's just the two of us, and my beta fish Einstein and Andy's grouchy cat Churchill. HAHA! Cool names for pets! :P

1. She has beautiful dark green eyes that I can see even in this small picture, mine are an ugly brown. :O I'm insulted! I have brown eyes and get complimented on them all the time.

I decided that if I wanted something bad enough, waiting for it wasn't going to get it for me. Damn straight!

"You wanna go out tonight?" I'm not sure, but I think this may be some cruel joke. :/

"Sorry weirdo, we were having a bet to see if you'd say yes or not. The people that thought you'd say no could've sworn that you were a lesbian, but I said no one turns Owen's down." I knew it! God! Such a freakin' jerk! AGH!

"So you're just mentally challenged."

Never mind, he was not cute, he was a prick. O.O I would've slapped him...wordlessly of course, so I wouldn't break the oath.

"I'm an idiot." I whispered under my breath. Aw, *tear*

This is a REALLY good idea for a story! And I totally love this first chapter. :D
edwardwriter chapter 6 . 4/3/2010
so how long does she have to play hard to get
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