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| Reinamarie chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
hi! i'm here. Ok some adjustments you can make: When Terrin's body had finish he let out a relieved sigh (,) then put his sword back in its scabbard and swung it over his shoulder and made his way back to the inn where he was staying which was called toadstool inn
Toadstool Inn would look much better and you can have more punctuation. it's ok to have short sentences.
i don't ustand this part (where snake the one eyed bar man)?
It's an interesting story, going to have more?