|Reviews for Did She Really Say That|
| name redacted chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I don't really know what to make of this. It's kind of funny. I can't tell if the girl is a hypothetical excuse to make that's what she said jokes, or if she's someone real(in which case the speaker sounds like either a jerk, or a really hormonal teenage guy). Are you sure that this is K?
As a peice of writing, it's pretty witty, (the writing, not the that's what she said jokes). The rhyme scheme is sporatic, but seems to work. It seems to have pretty good rhythem, and is mechanically clean, although I'm not sure if you need the period at the end, and only half of the "that's what she said"s have an exclamation point at the end.