Reviews for Shoot Laser Beams From My Eyes
name redacted chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Love the refrain. Also, interesting rhyming. I just can't tell if it's reflexive of the desultory state of dreaming, or is forced for the sake of rhyme scheme (dictionary/canary. That is either the one of the coolest word pairing ever, or there because it aids the flow/rhythem of the poem, which are both pretty good. I can't help wondering if there's a real life parallelism in here.