Reviews for An Obsessive Desire
fellintothemoon chapter 1 . 1/27
Hey there. Melissa here from A Drop of Romeo. Justs here to let you know that this story was added under the One Shot category! Here's your review:

Melissa Thinks: This flash piece is filled with raw, numbing emotion, which is why I love it so much! Although I'm not in the character's exact position, it's easy to empathize with her and her struggle. "An Obsessive Desire" portrays a very sad, and very real, disorder - bulimia - and although it may not be the fluffiest of pieces, I think that it's a very thoughtful and emotion provoking story that everyone can find a deeper meaning in.
Java-dude chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
ambient enigmaish

thats quite the heartbreak

my poor London heart.
pattEcake chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
This was so sad ):

But amazingly written, nevertheless.
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Oh wow

that's really good

and it's quite sad too :/
Skyterra chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
My first reaction was... eew. I mean it in a good way, of course! I've read some stories with eating disorders, and I feel like you've done a realistic job. It's just that I'm... not... really... a fan of eating disorders, obviously. I think it's really scary. I'm glad that you wrote about such a powerful topic though - it really does need to be addressed these days. :) Good job!
renegade01 chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
that was well written. kinda gross (for me anyway) but realistically done.

i like how you're addressing a powerful issue. ;)
Vena Cava chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Love your descriptions in this. Love. :) Great diction, not contrived at all.

I wish you could enter, but alas, you're staff. :P

(And bravo for the disclaimer at the bottom.)

Keep writing, you're getting better and better. :D Mwah!