It's nice.

This is an interesting concept. I feel a slight chill as I read this. It is a slightly creepy story, but I think it was handled well.

Hey! I just finished reading chapter nine of I love you please, and I loved it! I hope you updste your story soon!

Wow! you know, I spend so much time every day looking for new, creative stories to read, but allmost every story i find seems copied, and un original in some way! This story, however, is incredable! Very well written, and I'm excited to keep reading the rest of it! I'll let ya know what I think of i'm done ;) when It

Please continue? Please? It's such an amazing story and I can't wait for more.

I really enjoy this story. The concept of it is so original, unique. I like how you characterized Death. It shows he has some feelings, too. Please update soon!

cant wait fo next chapter i like this

Yay! Please update again soon. :)

Oh! The guy Death met a while ago. The one that was OK with dieing.

Oh dear. That was her uncle? How sad. (.

Hoping you'll start updating regularly. I'm liking this story.

Death's point of view is... interesting. Though I expected it to be a bit more old-timey. And it's sweet that he's saving trinkets for Ariane.

Reading onward!

"I heard the soft shuddering of his breath as he spoke, his face tilting to the side.

"Lovely.""

You say so much in so few words. I swear it's some sort of talent.

I really like this. Great concept, and Ariane is an interesting character. Not quite sure what to think of her, but she's intriguing.

And I love that single line. "Forget."

Fave'd.

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MORE! Why has the writting ceased?