Reviews for Petalled
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
intriguing metaphor. i kind of like how the words fall like the petals.
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
(OH! I just realized that last poem was a string of haiku. That definitely explain the line breaks. My apologies ;)

I love the way you use the petal falling image. I've seen it a lot, but not anything like this. You have a very interesting and unique message, and a great ending because it summed it all up so well.

[you brushed it/away and goodbye)] This wording was a little odd. You wouldn't say "you brushed it goodbye."

[to be destined/by greater things/that they do not/see with their/hearts] Hm, interesting idea.

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Abhyank chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Nice irony to share..but i wonder why u used petal for this relevance.. anything else like even a leaf or even a shit of bird sitting on a tree cud have been

(it wasn't sarcastic anyway.. i liked the poem thoroughly..just tried to add bit of humor to it )