|Reviews for The Woman In The Moon|
| Gimme Back My Pigeon chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Whoaz. I really liked this poem. Short yet...comfortably short in a way, for me. Loved the imagery you weaved through it, and the dialogue you incorporate is unique and smart. "Washing me translucent with his eyes" literally made me smile.
And I thought I was the only one who wrote, "The sky/water/clouds/whatever freaking abiotic factor blinked this color/this emotion..."
I'm seeing more of your love of words through your word choice. And I think if I'd have to say which one is my favorite line, I'd pick all of them. Nicely done.
-feeling weird writing nearly 3 paragraphs of a review on an 11-lined poem-
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Wow. This is lovely, very lovely. Amazing job writing this piece, keep it up :D